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I'm not sure that i wrote the following announcement is correct and it makes sense , help me correct it : urrently, some workers who have no lift truck driving certificates are in need of driving forklift trucks in order to serve our manufacturing tasks. Therefore, the Department of administration would inform Department of manufacturing that sending us the worker names by January 19th, 2008. After those workers finish the training course : safety of forklift truck operators , they can drive forklift trucks in accordance with regulations on occupational safety and health while performing work. If any worker don't observe this regulation, he will be fired
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- Workers who are interested in receiving forklift driver's licenses are urgently needed to serve for our manufacturing force. The Department of Administration is asking the Department of Manufacturing to send the Department of Administration the names of willing workers by January 19, 2008. The workers must complete the following training courses: safety for forklift operators and driving the forklift in accordance with regulations on occupational safety and health while working. If any worker does not observe these regulations, he or she will be fired. ~Did you mean January 19, 2009?
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